Christmas Pitch:

To improve, I could have went into more detail on my product and the reasons behind my choices.
Also, I could have spent more time on my advert, adding improvements and maybe making it longer.











Dan's pitch is for a turkey for Christmas dinner.
His target audience is the age of 20's upwards and leaning more towards females.
Dan has done very well but to improve he could check some of his spellings on his slides.